你有沒有發現，現在很多網路廣告好像比朋友還了解你？
這集 Writing Lab，我們不練整篇作文，只專注練一條 very TOEFL-safe 的論點：
👉 當企業過度蒐集與分析個人資料時，使用者可能逐漸失去對數位平台的信任。
本集會帶你拆解：
🦙 privacy-centered argument 怎麼建立
🦙 如何從「資料追蹤」一路推到「社會後果」
🦙 TOEFL Academic Writing 常見關鍵字
🦙 五個可重複使用的模板長句
這不是背句子。
而是訓練你在考場中，如何讓一條論點自然長出來。
適合：
✔ TOEFL Writing Discussion Board 題型
✔ 科技倫理 / 隱私 / 商業規範題目
✔ 想練 argument generation 的同學
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Have you ever felt like online ads know more about you than they should?
In this Writing Lab short episode, we focus on one single TOEFL-safe argument:
the idea that targeted advertising raises ethical concerns because it intrudes on personal privacy.
In this episode, you’ll learn:
🦙 how to build a privacy-centered argument
🦙 how to move from data collection to social consequences
🦙 useful TOEFL Academic Writing vocabulary
🦙 five reusable long template sentences
This is not about memorizing fancy expressions.
It’s about learning how arguments naturally develop under TOEFL time pressure.
Perfect for students practicing:
✔ TOEFL Writing Discussion Board tasks
✔ technology & ethics topics
✔ privacy and digital platform discussions
✔ academic argument generation
Writing is not about sounding impressive.
It’s about sounding clear, logical, and academic.
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